Monday, January 26, 2009

Halitosis

I was cleaning out one of my purses this weekend and came across a slip of paper where I had written a "poem". I use the word poem loosely since I'm not sure that this technically applies. I wrote it over the summer during a church service and I remember I had to stifle my giggles since I thought it was hilarious! (I know what you're thinking, "Why was she writing poems during church?"...my mind just kind of wanders at times, all times, and sometimes I just have to get my thoughts down on paper, regardless of where I am or what it is I am writing!)
Let me know what you think!

"Halitosis"
"Dude, your breath is killing me!" she spoke sharply
as he whispered softly the words, "I love you"
in her ear.


Happy Monday!
Take care,
Julie

6 comments:

Kristin said...

you are funny! we sure know some folks who could use that poem and take it to heart!! seriously, what do you say to them when their breath is SO HORRID!?
and yes, we are too very excited about lost being back on. it was great....much mystery. miss you friend!

Emily said...

Hallmark definitely has a job waiting for you. :)

Debbie said...

I think it is hysterical but I am dying to know who was sitting next to you that inspired this.

Bubba's Sis said...

I'm with Emily - I SO see this on a greeting card!

D... said...

You are hysterical!

Mrs. Naz of All That Naz & Becoming Me said...

LOL!!!!!!!!!!